Guest @DSapeyOwl Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 To all fellow Wednesday fan I am writing a match report about every match I go to this season (Every home, a good chunk of away) as I see it. The website it is on is: www.breadandbutterfootball.com the posts about SWFC are by me. There is only two so finding them shouldn't be a problem. I did one for each match we have played this season including the Capital One Cup match so if you would be so kind as to read them and give me feedback I would appreciate it. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest @DSapeyOwl Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 If you can't find the Oldham one it is becaue it is still being checked by the moderator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alcock dived Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 It's always nice to see people writing passionately about Wednesday and i enjoyed this for the most part. One piece of constructive criticism though, the sentence that begins by talking about JJ and MA's understanding, and ends with "goodnight vienna" is 136 words long, with no comma's. It's one of my worst traits too when i'm writing, i.e. long sentences, but i usually have comma's! I felt breathless whilst reading it. Just be a little more careful when editing i would suggest. Overall though, really good effort, i enjoyed your style and it's always good when it's from a fans perspective! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest @DSapeyOwl Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 It's always nice to see people writing passionately about Wednesday and i enjoyed this for the most part. One piece of constructive criticism though, the sentence that begins by talking about JJ and MA's understanding, and ends with "goodnight vienna" is 136 words long, with no comma's. It's one of my worst traits too when i'm writing, i.e. long sentences, but i usually have comma's! I felt breathless whilst reading it. Just be a little more careful when editing i would suggest. Overall though, really good effort, i enjoyed your style and it's always good when it's from a fans perspective! Thanks mate! I generally am pretty good with the commas so I'll watch out for that, thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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