acertainromanceswfc Posted September 21, 2017 Share Posted September 21, 2017 Few words ahead of the derby re pashun etc https://acertainromancesite.wordpress.com/2017/09/21/dont-you-forget-about-me/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maldenowl Posted September 21, 2017 Share Posted September 21, 2017 I like it. One point on grammar though - you don't need an and after a comma. One or t'other. "pyro, and" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robswfc Posted September 21, 2017 Share Posted September 21, 2017 13 minutes ago, maldenowl said: I like it. One point on grammar though - you don't need an and after a comma. One or t'other. "pyro, and" Incorrect, the comma in that sentence is fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maldenowl Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 (edited) On 21/09/2017 at 22:29, robswfc said: Incorrect, the comma in that sentence is fine It may be fine but the fact remains you don't need an and after the comma Edited October 13, 2017 by maldenowl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 @Sam779 will be pîssed. He’s our blog writer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S36 OWL Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 Simple minds and all that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steveger Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 I'll be alone, dancing you know it baby..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S36 OWL Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 Just now, steveger said: I'll be alone, dancing you know it baby..... Down by the Waterfront ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steveger Posted October 13, 2017 Share Posted October 13, 2017 5 minutes ago, S36 OWL said: Down by the Waterfront ? While the rivers in front of me that's where I'm goin' to be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robswfc Posted October 14, 2017 Share Posted October 14, 2017 13 hours ago, maldenowl said: It may be fine but the fact remains you don't need an and after the comma Sometimes you do. Depends on the meaning and intonation you're intending to convey in the text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr. benway Posted October 14, 2017 Share Posted October 14, 2017 1 hour ago, robswfc said: Sometimes you do. Depends on the meaning and intonation you're intending to convey in the text. Yep. Eats, Shoots, and Leaves etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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