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Steve Bracknall Sunday League - Episode 3


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First episode had real potential.

But it's growing a bit tired already. Don't understand the massive gaps between the episodes. Surely they've all been filmed already?

I genuinely thought, that there could be something quite big in this theme and story of it after the first episode. Second episode was mediocre, and this one followed suit.

Shame really.

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The gap has killed this to be honest. It could have been filmed all in a week and released over a period of 4 or 5 weeks. It would have had some real traction. But this is just too long between episodes.

The length of them is probably just about right for "webisodes". they should be 3 to 5 mins long. You're not making war&peace the musical so they shouldn't be anywhere near 15mins or longer.

the accents are a bit thick sounding - we know we're from Sheffield - we dont need to labour it.

other than that - very nice, very well done

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